HMD: Constructive & Positive Feedback! (March)

[thepull_mods]

How's My Driving: Con-crit & Pos-crit!

This post is for providing Constructive AND Positive feedback for fellow players regarding how they play their characters in Siren's Pull.

Constructive criticism should be just that - please avoid bashing or being rude. If you have critique for a characterization, please support it as much as possible and offer as much help as you can to the player. Remember - the point of the HMD Meme is to help fellow players, not to discourage or insult them. This goes for both giving and receiving critique.

Positive feedback is a genuine compliment or other positive aspects of how that character is played. Please avoid empty praises or general fangirling/fanboying, and try to give a viable reason that you're complimenting the fellow player - well thought out compliments always mean more, after all!

If anyone notices anything going wrong on this meme, please get hold of a mod via IM, PM, or email and let us know right away so we can deal with it appropriately.

To participate in HMD:

- copy the HTML-coded information in the handy textbox below
- paste it into a new comment and fill in your character or characters' names, journal names, and canon information
- other players will respond with comments or compliments for your character
- reply to other posts with compliments for other players!

<b>Player Name:</b> <b>Character Name:</b> <b>Character Journal:</b> <user name=""> <b>Character Canon Source:</b> <i>(A short summary of what your character's been up to in Port this month may be helpful. If you'd like to ask for any specific feedback or advice, You can do it here, too)</i>

Thanks for participating, guys!

Comments

[thequarterback]

Can I just say that I love you forever? ;A; This legit makes my shitty... however long it's been just... a billion times better ;A;

This really means a lot to me <3333

I WANT ALL OF THE THREADS EVER TOO OKAY

[inthejunk]

Hahaha I can't the neighbors have brought elephants inside upstairs and are training them to tap-dance to house. Or else there's a big DDR party for some inexplicable reason with like 300lb dudes that are super drunk and loud?

...Student housing. Its full of mysteriousness.

[showbizpanache]

B( I will call elephant exterminators.

[duomaxwell]

Player Name: JeniOctavia

Character Name: Kazuma Ikezawa
Character Journal: readyforwar
Character Canon Source: Summer Wars
Mostly Kazuma has just been going to school and living life as well as anyone who has been in the Port for two years can live. But he is struggling more with his Core-given power and has been quietly asking for help with it. Unfortunately it's a pride thing that keeps him from letting his girlfriend, Nadeko Sengoku, know that anything is going on and this will likely come to bite him on the ass later.

Character Name: Duo Maxwell
Character Journal: duomaxwell
Character Canon Source: Gundam Wing
Duo is, as usual, active all over the place. Talking with friends, hanging out, working, the usual eighteen year old stuff. But the things with Sylar and Claire have got him worried, and while he's trying to stay out of trouble it's not going to last long.

Character Name: Minako Aino
Character Journal: cestlasvenus
Character Canon Source: Pretty Guardian Sailor Moon
Minako has been pretty quiet as of late. She's focused on her work at Violet Systems, and most of her vigilante work has taken a back seat. As has her music, though that's something she would like to get back in to.

Character Name: Eitarou Sakuma
Character Journal: unholyshit
Character Canon Source: Macademi Wasshoi!
Caster leave the port so soon after Takuto's breakdown left Eitarou feeling down and out for a while, but he's slowly getting back in the game at the academy and making new friends.

[showbizpanache]

GOOD YOU SHOULD SMILE MORE AND FROWN LESS

<333 /throws love on

[inthejunk]

Oh, cool. Thanks dude! Fuckin' partyderms, right?

[inthejunk]

Enjoying the new kid. I'd love to see more of Kanji when you get more free time, but yep, still diggin' on you forevs.

[inthejunk]

Sorry the tags have been slow on my end, dude (I'm kinda on hiatus but I didn't want to totally slack on the greeter stuff!)

Anyway, have had a great time in the one very short thread we've done together already!

[doeswhathewants]

Player Name: Mish

Character Name:Loki
Character Journal: doeswhathewants
Character Canon Source: Marvel Comics
Loki has gotten himself a hellhound, helped out a coupe of friends in his very special Loki way and turned all of the eggs in the city into Cadbury eggs. At the moment, he's a bit at a loss with the whole HoA situation because no, Mags, no don't go nuts. Burn the demon. And that's about it. I think.

Character Name: Alucard
Character Journal: tinyvampiregod
Character Canon Source: Hellsing: the Dawn manga
Alucard just got here! He first believed the city was some kind of hallucination or mind control from the Nazi group he was sent to destroy, but now he knows better. He's chilling at the Helsing manor and killing darkness creatures.

[inthejunk]

Totally a fan of all the mischief! ...Also he will be getting that call one day if Yosuke ever remembers that conversation. It's like a 50/50 shot. Anyway, keep up the good work keeping people hard at work sorting the shenanigans out. Small, ridiculous player plots are always fun.

[asano_san]

Player Name: Lorie

Character Name: Dr. Byron Orpheus
Character Journal: dr_orpheus
Character Canon Source: The Venture Bros.
Recent activities include being friendly and fatherly to a few people, staring disapprovingly at Loki and learning that Caster has left the city and Solstice Academy will have to be under new leadership.

Character Name: Asano Keigo
Character Journal: asano_san
Character Canon Source: Bleach
Keigo has moved into a new apartment with Yosuke and Norio. Norio is having some catmonkey issues. Grell still visits.

Character Name: Luppi Antenor
Character Journal: itsatrep
Character Canon Source: Bleach
There was random Norio bothering. Ulquiorra's back. So is Ichigo. I meant to tag Hinamori to torment Hitsugaya, and I will go do that now.

[hostage]

Yoyo I'm fucked up at this moment so just ilu and yes Kanji and Yosuke should totally get married.

[12second_orz]

Player Name: Claire
Character Name: Yukio Tonegawa
Character Journal: 12second_orz
Character Canon Source: Kaiji
Not as much as I'd like! He's been considering citizenship classes, though, and having plenty of awkwardness with Chane, because people are not allowed in his head under any circumstances.

[inthejunk]

Yeah, exact-

wait, no! HELL NO. There's a ten foot rule! Get on your side of the internet!

(Yeah yeah dorkface ilu2. Let's go make some assbabies or whatever. How do you call shotgun for topsies? 'Cause shotgun for topsies!)

(...And then between the two of us people get very wrong ideas about Kanji and Yosuke and those totally innocent popsicles made of actual ice and high fructose whatever. Whoops.)

[acemedium]

Player Name: Sipp
Character Name: Maya Fey
Character Journal: acemedium
Character Canon Source: Ace Attorney
Dead family and cast antics is the name of the game for this little spirit medium this month! Aside from that and her usual nonsense, her little cousin's just shown up and gotten swooped down upon by Manfred Von Karma. Oh, her life...

Character Name: Megabyte
Character Journal: viraldawn
Character Canon Source: Reboot
Still laying low, Megabyte's still in disguise, gathering information and allies while he plots his next move and tries to map out the best way to grab power. Hasn't quite figured out they aren't in a system, but soon enough. Matrix has just shown up as well, so he's making ~plaaaaans~

Note: Still worried about voice for both of them, so let me know if you notice anything off or would like something explained. My Megabyte muse has been quiet so he hasn't gotten out much this month, my apologies, but I will be working on that and his activity in general!

[predominates]

Player Name: Dee

Character Name: Irene Adler
Character Journal: predominates
Character Canon Source: Sherlock
(Still new and getting her bearings, but she's really just sitting back, learning about everyone and this city. She's moving into a new place and probably going to make her way into AGI here soon. Gaining clients, etc.)

Character Name: Amy Pond
Character Journal: sharp
Character Canon Source: Doctor Who
(Confrontations all over the place. She has been harassing Damon for information because her memories of him came back. She ran into Sylar. So yeah. And then doing her normal greeting thing now that new people have been showing up.)

[arealwoman]

Player Name: Kerry

Character Name: Helen Magnus
Character Journal: longaevus
Character Canon Source: Sanctuary
Working, working, having friend time, working, working. And then Francis went home so she's distancing a little. And working. It helps to distance herself.

Character Name: Kitty Pryde
Character Journal: walkinthruwalls
Character Canon Source: X-Men
She's been helping Jubilee and getting to know her better after the whole Magneto thing. Anyone in HoA? She's moved into Jubilee & Emma's condo. Girl time

Character Name: Christina McKinney
Character Journal: arealwoman
Character Canon Source: Ugly Betty
Christina arrived, got drunk and threw up while broadcasting to the network. She's pretty much stayed inside since arriving and does not like the place. At all.

[arealwoman]

I really loved the thread(s) with Helen & Finn. Your voice for him is fantastic and he's lovely to read. I'll definitely be hitting him up for more cr (with Kitty too! Go teens?)

[arealwoman]

I love tagging Yosuke and Helen's just going to mother him any time he's ill (which by my inbox has happened again? :D)

[whitefeathered]

Player Name: K
Character Name:
Character Journal: whitefeathered
Character Canon Source: Magic Kaito
I've been trying to get Aoko more active in general, so she's poked more people. As always, I like to make sure I'm sounding okay with her voice. She's had a few changes from canon, but I want to make sure at core she still sounds Aoko-ish.

Character Name: Rimudo/Uruki
Character Journal: un_fated
Character Canon Source: Fushigi Yuugi Genbu Kaiden
Rimudo hasn't been up to quite as much, aside from an incident with Hitsugaya . . . But I like to make sure I'm on track with his voice too.

colee

[cheerhealer]

Player Name: Colee

Character Name: Butt-Head
Character Journal: youfartknocker
Character Canon Source: Beavis and Butt-Head
He tried capturing Aslan.


Character Name: Claire Bennet
Character Journal: cheerhealer
Character Canon Source: Heroes
Sylar got her the day before her trial so she decided to eff that noise and work on taking Sylar out instead. She's a brunette now too.


Character Name: William Murderface
Character Journal: murderfacing
Character Canon Source: Metalocalypse
Newly arrived, he's just making friends(?) over the network.

Anon-enabled crit is available on each journal!

[duomaxwell]

Colee bby you are amazing. Seriously. I love love love love what we've got going on with Duo and Claire right now. All the stupid little arguments and drama and good moments, all of it! And your ability to take on completely random characters that I'm sure hardly anyone else has ever thought of apping to a serious game before just blows me away.

Stay awesome. Really. That's all I can tell you!

Re: colee

[longaevus]

Echoing above

I love where our cr with Helen and Claire has gone, how their relationship is molding and the plans that we have for them, they make me so excited and I just love them :D

I love how Kitty and Claire's friendship is building too and can't wait to do more with them :)

And Christina and Murderface. Lol. That thread is making me giggle hardcore. They should be drinking buddies. Yep.

And youuuuu. I love you. Adore you. You're so lovely, sweet and adorable and I love talking and plotting and everything with you ♥ coleeeee

[ace_of_knaves]

Player Name: Psi Yamaneko



Character Name: The Joker
Character Journal: ace_of_knaves
Character Canon Source: DC Comics
Joker's been around. He killed Peter Petrelli with a poisoned knife to get back at Sylar for Batman's murder, causing Peter to die repeatedly from the toxin. He was also the first victim of Jennifer Laniston, who robbed him of his memory of the accident at ACE. Losing this extremely important moment in his history has made him even more unstable than usual as he struggles to figure out when his human self ended and his clown self began.


Character Name: Guybrush Threepwood
Character Journal: mighty_pirate
Character Canon Source: The Secret of Monkey Island
Guybrush just arrived in Siren's Port and is already determined to get home. This quest has lead him to ask a lot of questions, especially about the Core, but he still can't wrap his head around how different the Port is than anything he knows.

[ibreakrules]

Player Name: Bry
Character Name: Frau
Character Journal: ibreakrules
Character Canon Source: 07-Ghost
Frau hasn't been around much in an "open" sense I guess. That's probably because he's lost so many friends so there aren't that many people he can talk to anymore. Oh well.