HMD: Constructive & Positive Feedback! (March)

[thepull_mods]

How's My Driving: Con-crit & Pos-crit!

This post is for providing Constructive AND Positive feedback for fellow players regarding how they play their characters in Siren's Pull.

Constructive criticism should be just that - please avoid bashing or being rude. If you have critique for a characterization, please support it as much as possible and offer as much help as you can to the player. Remember - the point of the HMD Meme is to help fellow players, not to discourage or insult them. This goes for both giving and receiving critique.

Positive feedback is a genuine compliment or other positive aspects of how that character is played. Please avoid empty praises or general fangirling/fanboying, and try to give a viable reason that you're complimenting the fellow player - well thought out compliments always mean more, after all!

If anyone notices anything going wrong on this meme, please get hold of a mod via IM, PM, or email and let us know right away so we can deal with it appropriately.

To participate in HMD:

- copy the HTML-coded information in the handy textbox below
- paste it into a new comment and fill in your character or characters' names, journal names, and canon information
- other players will respond with comments or compliments for your character
- reply to other posts with compliments for other players!

<b>Player Name:</b> <b>Character Name:</b> <b>Character Journal:</b> <user name=""> <b>Character Canon Source:</b> <i>(A short summary of what your character's been up to in Port this month may be helpful. If you'd like to ask for any specific feedback or advice, You can do it here, too)</i>

Thanks for participating, guys!

Comments

[doeswhathewants]

DUO! I am so excited for CR with him. You have his voice down so well, that relaxed disposition with the hints of seriousness. Love. So much love.

[doeswhathewants]

Dr. Orpheus is so much love. I read all of your comments in his voice in my head, it's absolutely perfect.

[doeswhathewants]

Words cannot express how much I love Claire and Butt-head. I'm always amazed at how well you're able to play Butt-head here and have it just fit naturally. And Claire! Her growth at this point is really organic and fits in perfectly with the character. I absolutely adore her CR with Loki and look forward to more <3

[doeswhathewants]

GUYBRUSH OMG. He's so fun, I've never played Monkey Island, but he's really engaging and I hope he gets to put together his crew and steal a ship or something <3

Joker is as always, this weird combination of intimidating and engaging. I'm so looking forward to seeing how he incites company warfare!

[plum_that_snaps]

Player Name: Amy
Character Name: Momo Hinamori
Character Journal: plum_that_snaps
Character Canon Source: Bleach
Momo's just arrived and is settling in at Hitsugaya and Byakuya's house.

[doeswhathewants]

Oh Ahiru. Loki still ships you with Joe.

She is so cute and perfect, so true to her characterization, I love the way you're handling her <3

[doeswhathewants]

Yes, YES~ All the Marvel love.

MJ is great, I'm not familiar with the version she's from, but she really feels her age, especially with your latest thread about her impatience on the powers appearing front. I can't wait to see where you go with her. Loki will troll :3

...and She Hulk will get trolled because so far SO AWESOME.

[inthejunk]

I play him from the videogame actually. To tell you the truth I haven't seen the anime either, oops. But from the few episodes I have seen, his personality is a bit different in that, so I guess I'll have to start specifying. Hah. Thanks for the reminder, dude.

And thanks for the rest, too! I've totally enjoyed our CR so far, so I am 110% behind this idea of making some more!

[doeswhathewants]

JFC I had no idea you played all those characters, the voices are so distinct and fleshed out.

Really enjoying Eric's reactions to the massive amount of vampires. Feels very true to character. I legit hear his voice when reading all the comments.

Sylar- omg. Creepy. Logical. Intelligent. Incredible grasp of the complexities of his character.

Simply, you're amazing.

[doeswhathewants]

I do not even know how you can be so freaking in character and on top of things. But keep doing it. All his threads HNNG I've never watched Supernatural but I stalk all the threads in SP for ya'lls interactions. They're just so genuine and good.

[doeswhathewants]

He's always very fresh and for that type of character, I can see how that would be hard, but you have his voice so down. I read his comments and posts in his voice :3 Keep being AWESOME.

[doeswhathewants]

OMG I had no idea you played Peter and Angel.

Dude. Dude. Angel. Wow. Your Angelus voice was so perfect, I cannot even. And I'm so wanting to tag on Angel with Alucard. Seriously.

[doeswhathewants]

Love your Seras. Her open curiosity and friendliness are perfectly on part with her character, I love the slight awkwardness she has in some situations and the surety in others. I'm so looking forward to seeing her CR with lolitacard develop <3

[the_dead_pool2]

Player Name: Peter
Character Name: Iroh
Character Journal: tea_lover64
Character Canon Source: Avatar the Last Airbender
(A short summary of what your character's been up to in Port this month may be helpful. If you'd like to ask for any specific feedback or advice, You can do it here, too) Iroh has been giving advice to a few people, working, and has recently started teaching at the dojo. He will shortly be looking for a replacement, so that he can start a tea shop.



Character Name:Deadpool/Wadewilson
Character Journal: the_dead_pool2
Character Canon Source: Marvel Comics
(A short summary of what your character's been up to in Port this month may be helpful. If you'd like to ask for any specific feedback or advice, You can do it here, too) Deadpool has pretty much been on security detail for the past while. After the fallout with Magneto and Crowley as well as the fallout from Godric and Angelus, he has been doing a lot of guarding. He is still training Claire, and has recently allowed her to stay at his place for a bit.


Character Name:Xellos
Character Journal: that_is_asecret
Character Canon Source:Slayers
(A short summary of what your character's been up to in Port this month may be helpful. If you'd like to ask for any specific feedback or advice, You can do it here, too) He has been engaging with the community, and looking for interesting people. He is acting somewhat helpful toward people, without being too nice. He is attempting to learn more about Core given powers.

[the_dead_pool2]

Light smack for dropping Angelus thread with Xellos. Good work with both the characters though, I haven't watched Buffy or Angel in many years, but you have got them down pretty well.

I also really enjoy your Peter, he has a good amount of inner conflict that goes on.

[the_dead_pool2]

Good job with all the Sirens Port mischief, I do like his attempts at being good, as always I will continue to stalk your posts... mmmmm yes, thats good stalking.

[bloodthirsts]

Thank youuu <3 That's so good to hear.

[doeswhathewants]

STALK AWAY <3

[that_is_asecret]

I hope to get some more CR with Maya and Iroh soon, probably tonight...

Also will be waiting for Megabyte to come around again, and always willing to backtag.

[askedtobe]

LOL I DO 8D

..... AJSKD;FAJDKSL;FAS

omg i don't even THANK YOU SO MUCH. .////. I was so completely absolutely terrified to try playing Angelus and I actually found it.... really fun. He just takes up SO MUCH ENERGY hoo boy. I kind of... want to do it again so I don't drop the ball as much cause I didn't get to do as much with him as I wanted, sadly. And Angelus was, admittedly, a blast. I like the evil disgusting disturbed boys, pfff.

BUT YES LIKE I SAID ANGEL SHOULD BE POSTING SOON and then you can throw Alucard at him ;;

[askedtobe]

NO I DESERVE MORE SMACK-AGE. Blame it all on Peter's busy-ness. I got behind on threads and then I get convinced that nobody will want threads that old replied to and then I just. Roll into a ball of fail, pff.

But even so, thank you! much appreciated :3 ♥

[gabriel_gray]

Thank you so much, especially about Eric's voice. The series tries so hard to make him ambiguous that sometimes it isn't even clear what his motivations are, I swear to god. And as for Sylar--he is so complex and not just a psycho, and I'm glad that comes across too. <3

[ella_of_frell]

Player Name: Mai
Character Name: Ella of Frell
Character Journal: ella_of_frell
Character Canon Source: Ella Enchanted
Pretty much Ella has been keeping herself busy - there was a misunderstanding with Chuck regarding Lucifurr (Hattie's cat), and due to a command she recently got drunk, but other than that, namuch.

[ibreakrules]

Ronald, Frau, plotting. He's too much fun not to. Ronald hasn't really come up enough in the manga for me to feel super comfortable critiquing him, but I will say that I love playing with him. He makes me laugh.

[motioned]

aaaaa sarah ;A; IT IS I WHO IS LUCKY TO HAVE YOU so I'm glad you feel the same! /wipes tears away soberly