sirenspull_ooc | HMD: Constructive & Positive Feedback! (March)

How's My Driving: Con-crit & Pos-crit!

This post is for providing Constructive AND Positive feedback for fellow players regarding how they play their characters in Siren's Pull.

Constructive criticism should be just that - please avoid bashing or being rude. If you have critique for a characterization, please support it as much as possible and offer as much help as you can to the player. Remember - the point of the HMD Meme is to help fellow players, not to discourage or insult them. This goes for both giving and receiving critique.

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Player Name:Zero
Character Name:Yosuke Hanamura
Character Journal:

inthejunk
Character Canon Source:Persona 4
Yosuke has taken up being a greeter, moved to his own apartment, and somehow got suckered into sharing it with Keigo and some kind of horny monkey thing...er, by which I mean Keigo's dear friend that guy Yosuke didn't ask the name of. Yeah. Other than that he got rejected in his advances on Claire, and has been obnoxiously phoning people he knows just to chatter at them because he's lonely. Though he'd prefer them to assume he's just being friendly! He's also planning to start an open mic night at the Cat's Eye, so that next time he asks a girl out she'll swoon with desire for the awesome guitar riffs he's hitting them with, naturally.

...Basically he's still being a teenager, and thus trying his damndest to pretend he's an adult instead.

Hit me with whatever you have, guys. I'm still newish and trying to work out the little bumps and bruises. I'd love some thoughts if anyone has 'em!

...I also feel like I should probably apologize to anyone who got stuck with this kid as a greeter. It's a learning process, I swear. He'll get the hang of it one day!

Yosuke is hilarious and you're a blast in RP and on Plurk. <3 Stay awesome.

Thanks dude, you're pretty holographic meatloaf yourself. (Nope, not even faking coherency right now. You're welcome.)

no dude don't even worry about it. I have a fever right now. I'm seeing noises.

Oooh synesthasia is cool!

Er. From like, a neurological perspective I mean.

We should probably go to bed...

Hahaha I can't the neighbors have brought elephants inside upstairs and are training them to tap-dance to house. Or else there's a big DDR party for some inexplicable reason with like 300lb dudes that are super drunk and loud?

...Student housing. Its full of mysteriousness.

B( I will call elephant exterminators.

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inthejunk - 2012-03-16 08:52 (UTC) - Expand

I love tagging Yosuke and Helen's just going to mother him any time he's ill (which by my inbox has happened again? :D)

D'aw. That is secretly his plan, tbh. 'If I call the doctor she might pet my hair again.' ...He's still trying to adjust. Haha. /facepalm

Anyway he'll be fine! It's just some laryngitis, it'd clear up on it's own anyway. Even he thinks that it would, he just wants someone to fuss. Feel free to have her prescribe him something horribleto make him knock it off if it gets annoying!

Lmao. Love it :D /keeps petting his hair

And aww, she'd never do that! She'll keep on fussing even if it bugs her, just for him to feel better :3

Such a nice lady! Totally worth all those long hours standing around in the cold and shouting at people to calm down.

She should be Saint Helen.

With all the people she looks adter? Maybe a bit, yeah!

Oh definitely!

Bro. Bro.

Let me just wrap up my love and fondness, cover it in duct tape and shove it under your door. I'll even include some peppermints. ♥ The shenanigans are priceless and you're a blast to plot with. You also don't make fun of me ~~too badly~~ when I spill food all over my lap, so for that I'll just sit here and cherish you forever.

Hahaha NO YOU. Never thought I'd get to ICly sit on a cake in the rain.

And I can't make fun of you for that now that you know the kilt story...

Hey we didn't have an awkward conversation this month, WHAT HAPPEN.

No seriously, I do love Yosuke. I have read his conversations on the network with pleasure and love his interactions with people. So much awkward teen.

HIATUS DUDE SORRY! Let's plan our awkward conversation for next month out...maybe they can bump into each other buying something embarrassing or whatever. /ponders

And aw, thanks! Enjoy it while it lasts, he's already grown up quite a bit since he got there. Hah, bnr thanks. It's the best compliment I can think of when people read stuff they're not involved in just cause they like watching the characters interacting!

That sounds pretty awesome, they need to meet offline :D Seras maybe doing her police beat and runs into Yosuke in an odd looking situation? ~~wots all this then~~

^^ I will stalk his development forever!

It wouldn't be his first police encounter. Whoops. Haha but yeah sure! And I agree they need to see each other irpl.

D'aw. I'll just have to make sure it's entertaining then so you won't be disappointed! ...And keep you in CR of course.

Yaaaay! Sounds awesome.

Heck yeah!

Yosuke is seriously fun. I've not seen Persona, but I like how friendly and fun he is :3 MOAR CR

I play him from the videogame actually. To tell you the truth I haven't seen the anime either, oops. But from the few episodes I have seen, his personality is a bit different in that, so I guess I'll have to start specifying. Hah. Thanks for the reminder, dude.

And thanks for the rest, too! I've totally enjoyed our CR so far, so I am 110% behind this idea of making some more!