HMD: Constructive & Positive Feedback!

[thepull_mods]

How's My Driving: Con-crit & Pos-crit!

This post is for providing Constructive AND Positive feedback for fellow players regarding how they play their characters in Siren's Pull.

Constructive criticism should be just that - please avoid bashing or being rude. If you have critique for a characterization, please support it as much as possible and offer as much help as you can to the player. Remember - the point of the HMD Meme is to help fellow players, not to discourage or insult them. This goes for both giving and receiving critique.

Positive feedback is a genuine compliment or other positive aspects of how that character is played. Please avoid empty praises or general fangirling/fanboying, and try to give a viable reason that you're complimenting the fellow player - well thought out compliments always mean more, after all!

If anyone notices anything going wrong on this meme, please get hold of a mod via IM, PM, or email and let us know right away so we can deal with it appropriately.

To participate in HMD:

- copy the HTML-coded information in the handy textbox below
- paste it into a new comment and fill in your character or characters' names, journal names, and canon information
- other players will respond with comments or compliments for your character
- reply to other posts with compliments for other players!

<b>Player Name:</b> <b>Character Name:</b> <b>Character Journal:</b> <user name=""> <b>Character Canon Source:</b> <i>(A short summary of what your character's been up to in Port this month may be helpful. If you'd like to ask for any specific feedback or advice, You can do it here, too)</i>

Thanks for participating, guys!

Comments

[controllingluck]

Player Name: Tori

Character Name: Claudio Kilgannon
Character Journal: thecrowingtobe
Character Canon Source: The Amory Wars
Claudio has been trying to deal with his powers, deal with his mother showing up, as well as play hero here and there. He's a good kid, but things got complex.

Character Name: Himawari Kunogi
Character Journal: controllingluck
Character Canon Source: xxxholic
Himawari has been apartment hunting, workign with the Greeters, hanging out with her friends and going on small secret dates with Will, shhh.

Character Name: Nami
Character Journal: namiwasheretoo
Character Canon Source: One Piece
Running one too many businesses. Trying to get over being ALONE here now that her Crew is all gone. Hanging out with Cloud a bit more. Having small AGI issues (i want more though).

I've been dealing with some health issues and haven't been as active as I should be. Fixing that though. Trying to catch up to everything and rejoin the RP race. So, I know I've got a few dropped threads but I intend to go back and hit them up with love!

[dawnward]

I haven't seen much of the other two because of life reasons on your part, but Himawari and Graham are really adorable and I love how she tries to put her best foot forward for him.

I was going to hit you up for some potential plot between Cass and Himawari now that Damian's gone, if you're up for it. And if you ever need anything, I'd be happy to do a thread with Claudio and Riku too.

[the_dead_pool2]

Well health comes first. After all if you drop to 0 hp or lower we'd have to use a raise dead spell on you, and thats just messy. :P

Well to keep you updated whats been happening with the two characters she interacts with.

Iroh has been keeping up Brooke's as best he can. He hired on a couple of teenagers to serve as waittresses/greeters (Rachel Berry and Quinn Fabray) and has been trying to manage the workload to help out Nami as best he can, though has been moving around more slowly due to being in the building when the explosion happened.

Deadpool has been working and helping out some peeps. He is now a licensed bounty hunter. I really want to do that date.

[eideteker_graham]

All the love in the world~♥! I think your ventures back to Hima's canon have really shown well, despite how far from her canon she is now, she still has that sweetness to her that isn't in the least cloying. How to manage to balance that out I'll never know!

[angel_of_death]

Himawari and Will are endearing. I'd love to see her brought to the house one day.